Saturday, December 3, 2011

Grammar Corrections


Grammar Corrections
Mr. Frisch was so excited to tell you about his holiday trip that he made several spelling mistakes.
Please read over the following letter and make the appropriate corrections.  In your Language Arts Journal make a list of the misspelled word and the correct words.  

Hello Class
       Did you know that treavaling is one of my favorit activity. it is relly fun to go different places and see new Worlds.  probably one of the most interesting places that I’ve ever visited is china.I think that this trep was so great because asia is relly a  diferent, there are so many unique things about life in the East.

In hong kong there is a cool cultural area with a sky cable car ride that traveal in the air for 5 miles.  the view is really incredible  If you are afraid of heights, this would be a long time to keep your eyees closed.  The cable care Ride takes you to a area with museums shows a gigantic Buddha statue and theater. Of course there is a starbucks, and other places to eat. 

     I cold share many more exciting thing about this trip, but I will savee the details for abother paper. When you have a change, go to Google and look for some images of Hong Kong.  You'll really love the city amd the photos will make my story come alive

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